Dorothy J Heydt
2019-07-29 04:15:46 UTC
If rec.arts.sf.composition were still live, I would be asking
there, in default of which I'm asking here.
In my current WIP I have a scene in which my protagonist has just
been told something that shocks him, and starts hearing "in his
mind's ear" his own internal reactions (which I've put in
italics, like any other thought of his that he doesn't speak
aloud), plus answers that are either things he knows and reminds
himself of, or quotations from things other people have said to
him in earlier chapters.
I've put the latter answers into boldface for the moment. I'm
using boldface *nowhere else* in the entire work. This is *not*
_The Interior Life_ redux. :) The passage is only about a hundred
words and I don't expect to have another like it -- but I need a way
to distinguish what he's doing (sitting there looking stupid, in roman)
from what he's thinking (in italic) and how himself answers him (in
boldface, unless someone can think of something better).
I definitely do not want to pull a David Brin and surround any of
the utterances with colons or something.
Any ideas?
there, in default of which I'm asking here.
In my current WIP I have a scene in which my protagonist has just
been told something that shocks him, and starts hearing "in his
mind's ear" his own internal reactions (which I've put in
italics, like any other thought of his that he doesn't speak
aloud), plus answers that are either things he knows and reminds
himself of, or quotations from things other people have said to
him in earlier chapters.
I've put the latter answers into boldface for the moment. I'm
using boldface *nowhere else* in the entire work. This is *not*
_The Interior Life_ redux. :) The passage is only about a hundred
words and I don't expect to have another like it -- but I need a way
to distinguish what he's doing (sitting there looking stupid, in roman)
from what he's thinking (in italic) and how himself answers him (in
boldface, unless someone can think of something better).
I definitely do not want to pull a David Brin and surround any of
the utterances with colons or something.
Any ideas?
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Dorothy J. Heydt
Vallejo, California
djheydt at gmail dot com
www.kithrup.com/~djheydt/
Dorothy J. Heydt
Vallejo, California
djheydt at gmail dot com
www.kithrup.com/~djheydt/